Positive: I will be active, aggressive and enthusiastic in many activities like study, work and something else.
Negative: I will get mad or sad easily.
Crime: I strangled Will with a scarf because of a really tiny thing.
Baised article:
It is not all Thomas' fault, many things combined to caused it
It is not Thomas' fault to kill Will, I will show you some details about the information I got from Thomas.In his class, he dropped pen down into a position that under Will's chair by accident. So Thomas ask him to help him pick up it, but Will pretend to ignore it. He become so sad for Will's neglect. So on their way home, Thomas asked Will to apologize, but Will did nothing except smiling that made Thomas became more sad and angry of his disrespect. Thomas became want to kill Will, so when he asked Thomas to go his home, Thomas did not reject. He found a scarf on the sofa, so when Will came, he used it to kill Will and ignored the present Will prepared for him. But when he found Will had dead, Thomas became so horrible that he came to police station to confess his crime.
Thomas is just a teenager, he have not known what can be done and what can not. So he is easy to became excited and do something wrong. It is also common for a teenager to become sad and mad easily. It is also easy for many adults to get angry and mad.
We can also find t is not all Thomas' fault because Will did wrong thing at first though it was not so serious. Will stirred up controversy at first, right?
Thomas is really good guy for him confess crime after he did not. The information I got from teacher is Thomas is really enthusiastic about his study, so he is good at study and the marks he got are always beyond B. It was so horrible for the teacher to get the message.
Here is another message I got from government about education. Unlike other provinces, in that province, no class about safety education is given to those students. So it is also government's fault to ignore it.
1)He wrote the article in the 3rd person, it seems unreasonable to understand that Thomas kill Will, because it was real little thing.
ReplyDelete2)aggressive, enthusiastic, and easily get mad,may be he can choose one key word/trait to tell his story, not two or more traits.
3)Thomas killed his classmate, Will. Actually, the details of killing is too specific. You're the reporter, how do you know the process of killing so specifically? Don't be so detailed.
4)Yes, he justified the reason. But it was not at length enough.
5)The character in the article is too mean, only because no apology for not picking up his pen, Thomas killed his classmate Will.The true person in real life will not do that kind of thing.
6)My impression is that the person is too mean and stingy. The person is a common and ordinary people in real life, but few or none will kill others or commit a crime.
①This article is written in the 3rd person
ReplyDelete② Thomas is a person who would be angry about some little things and esay to get mad.There may be a beast in his heart. He can imagine a story has more relation to his trait.
③Thomas killed his friend because of some little things. Reporter should not post the name of teenage crimanal.
④The eassy tells about the reason why Thomas killed Will clearly.
⑤Thomas in article is easy to get angry and do something mad easily without thinking anything. But actual Thomas is a wise and quiet boy.
⑥I think real Thomas would never become a man as Thomas in article. Wht a mean, mad man in the article!