Dec 11, 2014

Transitions

Section 1 : Paragraph1: Lincoln thought spring would not be far when Keller wanted to
                                      travel.
                  Paragraph 2: A little knowledge is bad.
                  Transition: Lincoln thought spring would come, but Keller misunderstood it and
                                   thought it would come soon, so she wanted to travel in spring. But
                                   it is winter in fact, so it is a bad idea to travel.

Section 2 : Paragraph 1: Merker thought it was stupid for Xi Jingping to have a cup of wine.
                  Paragraph 2: People who say a lot of mean words will hardly attack.
                  Transition: Merker said some mean words but she would not take action.

Section 3: Paragraph 1:  Rihanna courted and ate(kissed) when Mark Twain lost his money.
                 Paragraph 2:  It is fair in love.
                 Transition: Mark Twain lost his money but he got love, so it is fair.

Section 4: Paragraph 1: Maria Sklodowska-Curie fell in love with Benedict Cumberbatch
                                       when he ate apple.
                 Paragraph 2: Eat apple will help you keep the doctor away.
                 Transition: Eat apple will help you keep the doctor away and close to lover.

Section 5: Paragraph 1: It shows they are lovers.
                 Paragraph 2: There is someone bad.
                 Transition: Two people are lovers, but one of them is a bad guy, and what he/she
                                   wants is money.

Dec 9, 2014

Project 4

Thomas is evil to kill Will
When I learned whole things, I became really horrible. This teenager has not learned how to get along with others, and has only learned how to kill.
Yes, he is only a teenager, is not a adult. But you also should know that he is not a child, so he should have learn to respect others life. I also find a detail that what did Thomas  think about is to kill him when Will invited Thomas home. He did not notice that Will would apologize and ignored the present that prepared for him. He was insane at that time, and we can not judge that he will not be insane again.
When I think about the reason of this event, I feel so strange that Thomas killed Will because of such a tiny thing. I think no one will kill others because of it, so Thomas must have some psychological problems. 
It is true that the school and government played bad roles in this event. The school only cares about grades rather than students behaviors and the government ignores the education about life. But we should also ask why only Thomas killed his classmates Will, rather than other students? So it is mostly Thomas fault to kill Will for his sensitive and mean personality.

Dec 4, 2014

Project 4

Trait: excitable
  Positive: I will be active, aggressive and enthusiastic in many activities like study, work and something else. 
  Negative: I will get mad or sad easily.

Crime: I strangled Will with a scarf because of a really tiny thing.

Baised article:
It is not all Thomas' fault, many things combined to caused it
    It is not Thomas' fault to kill Will, I will show you some details about the information I got from Thomas.
    In his class, he dropped pen down into a position that under Will's chair by accident. So Thomas ask him to help him pick up it, but Will pretend to ignore it. He become so sad for Will's neglect. So on their way home, Thomas asked Will to apologize, but Will did nothing except smiling that made Thomas became more sad and angry of his disrespect. Thomas became want to kill Will, so when he asked Thomas to go his home, Thomas did not reject. He found a scarf on the sofa, so when Will came, he used it to kill Will and ignored the present Will prepared for him. But when he found Will had dead, Thomas became so horrible that he came to police station to confess his crime.
    Thomas is just a teenager, he have not known what can be done and what can not. So he is easy to became excited and do something wrong. It is also common for a teenager to become sad and mad easily. It is also easy for many adults to get angry and mad.
    We can also find t is not all Thomas' fault because Will did wrong thing at first though it was not so serious. Will stirred up controversy at first, right?
    Thomas is really good guy for him confess crime after he did not. The information I got from teacher is Thomas is really enthusiastic about his study, so he is good at study and the marks he got are always beyond B. It was so horrible for the teacher to get the message.
    Here is another message I got from government about education. Unlike other provinces, in that province, no class about safety education is given to those students. So it is also government's fault to ignore it.